In 2020 we made a narrative writing story about journeys. Here's mine :
FUTURE BY Aden: It was a warm day in NZ. I was at high school. It was very different from primary school. One thing I have noticed though, was when I used to play with Zade and others the more we get older the less we are around each other. It's like we are drifting away from our old friends so that's why it's sooooo good to have friends and remember the best times you had
because older life changes and you could have children and new friends you won't know who they are anymore until your friend or your kid says who are those people and then you remember all the memories you had with them. It is something you should treasure.
Anyway it was hard at high school because you have to get set for your future. You need to be good at maths English and many other subjects. High school pretty much gets you ready for university so you can get your dream job. I have always wanted to be a Singer but if I couldn't be I would be a Doctor. The first thing to do when you're at high school is to get a JOB when you have your own job you can do many more things like shop for clothes and things you want and maybe your parents will buy the things you need. Once you have your job When you're older you will face a lot of problems but you will learn in time to maneuver through those problems. Then once you're 16 to 20 you could leave your home and purchase your own house then you are set and ready for your future. I hope you liked they story
I thought my work was all right its not really about journeys that's what I think. i would really like it if you would give a positive comment